everybody’s sharing their writing so i might as well share some of mine

SleepinqZzz 11/8/2022 01:23 pm 154

It was moments such as these that Jack loved more than anything.

The rusting equipment of 246th Street’s park creaked quietly as Jack pushed April on the swings. He was humming lightly, and April’s eyes were shut. No doubt she was lost in thought. When he was alone with April; when they didn’t need words. But, they were still nice to have.

“Jack?”

“Yeah?”

“I don’t want your dumb ass moved to remedial. I’ll miss you.”

“We have lunch and homeroom. And the baking club… and we live in the same neighbourhood. Not to mention church and camp counseling.” Jack's mouth perked at the ends with amusement as he continued.

“I know, I know,”

“So what’s wrong, shortstack?”

She shrugged.

“I know you’re worried,” He grabbed the chain of the swing to slow it to a halt, then looked down at her. His arm was resting on the chain of the swing and he looked into her aventurine eyes with a sympathetic frown. “I don’t know why, though.

“Freddie.”

“What’s the worst that could happen?”

“I don’t even want to think about that-” She laughed worriedly.

“Hey. Don’t sweat it, dummy. Bad for your skin.” April laughed at his teasing, and Jack beamed at her.

Her silvery laugh almost always lilted at the end, giving her an almost singsong tone. The only time it didn’t sound this way was when she was faking it. If something was especially funny, she would snort. Every time there was a humorous moment in his day, it reminded him of these facts.

Without even thinking, Jack hugged April from behind comfortingly. April tensed in surprise, then relaxed and laid back in his arms. Now they both shut their eyes and felt the heave and push of each other’s breathing. It was a moment they had shared many times before. This was always where Jack would notice the smell of apples and cinnamon in April’s soft, caramel-coloured hair. Well, her hair wasn’t only caramel. It was the colour of walnuts near the roots, then chocolate and caramel as it fell to her lower back. Her eyelashes were the same walnut brown as her roots.

There was a moment once when he pointed it out to her. She shook her head in disbelief as if he was messing with her. The same way you do when your sibling says there’s a spider on you.

“It’s just- brown… It’s the colour of mud. It’s nothing special, Jack.” She responded with a sad smile.

He opened his eyes and peered down at April; whose large eyes had already fluttered open and were staring at him. For a moment, in the sunlight, her eyes always reminded him of mint chocolate chip ice cream. They exchanged smiles, then broke eye contact when April pushed up her glasses. He noticed for the first time that she didn’t push them up from the bridge, but rather picked them up by the hinges and placed them back in their desired position.

It was moments such as these that Jack loved April Leslie Martin more than anything.

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Nov 8, 2022 3:00 pm

@Glitchy_XDD: yea it is big grin i’m planning on self-publishing on amazon

Nov 8, 2022 2:52 pm

@SleepinqZzz: Alot of drama, im assuming its a love/romatic novel, are you going to publish it some where? or it just for fun?

Nov 8, 2022 2:17 pm

@Glitchy_XDD: okay sooo

all the main characters are on their last year of high school. jack and april had been best friends since 7th grade, and that’s around the same time april and freddie stopped being friends. freddie (which is short for fredrika) was never good at school and always preferred more creative things like painting and writing, and would always encourage april to reach out to her creative side. this upset april, who was terrified of failure at the time and not an artistic individual; preferring more analytical things like math and science. april unfriended freddie over this which caused them to be on bad terms. april later apologizes about this and they become acquainted again.

jack has liked april basically since they met, but he has a lot of guilt about it because april’s wlwnb. april and freddie had asymmetrical feelings for each other for about a year after they stopped being friends, and by the time they decide to be civil again, april gains feelings again. she becomes upset when she realizes that jack has feelings for her, and things get even more frustrating for her when freddie gets close to a boy named marcelo (freddie’s fem-aligned non-binary and pansexual btw). april freaks out about it, but it turns out marcelo is just a friend, and that freddie likes her too.

so freddie and april are a thing now and jack is trying so hard to be supportive. he becomes good friends with marcelo, who encourages him to move on. eventually, jack is able to move on. he’s paired up with a girl named delaney for a language project and they immediately hit it off. he gains feelings for her but is terrified of them because he doesn’t want to be rejected again. delaney absolutely adores jack; she’s too shy to say it. when she finally gets the guts to tell him and ask him out, he panics and rejects her. delaney is obviously very sad about it and goes to marcelo who’s like “tfym he loves you” and she feels better with the knowledge that he does, but never confronts him about it.

for another language assignment, jack has to exchange notes to someone in the class, he decides to write an apology and confession to delaney. she is still absolutely head over heels for him, and talks to him after class. they decide to start dating.

so then it’s prom and after all this angst i just wanted like 6 chapters of pure unadulterated fluff but i do have to tie up some loose ends with marcelo. but yeahhh that’s basically the whole plot


Nov 8, 2022 1:39 pm

@SleepinqZzz: That actually would be cool, i always like knowing the behind the scenes of story and such lol

Nov 8, 2022 1:32 pm

@Glitchy_XDD: thank you! i’m not sure if that’s rhetorical or not but if it isn’t i could infodump for you! helps me reorganize my plans too happy

Nov 8, 2022 1:31 pm

Ooo! this is intresting! i love to know more about this!!