Working on my mini album 'Dentists office' but I need help.

Deleted Account 2/16/2022 07:15 am 2342

So, I decided to start working on a dentist themed album but I am brain dead and need help with lyrics- can someone help? i'll accept comments and messages 5148adeacc482_pink-bow.gif

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Feb 16, 2022 5:26 pm

Ooooo if a song is either really sad or chaotic and stressful, add something at the end about only getting a (metaphorical) sticker/lollipop after all the stress/hurt/upset/etc you were put under (side note reading these comments is so cool people can be SO creative I love this site)

Feb 16, 2022 3:45 pm

@smile_kid:

caps

"Memories have stained my teeth, drinking bleach removes them"

WAIT OMG THAT WOULD BE A SUPER COOL LYRIC I THINK SOMETHINGS MISSING FROM IT THO

maybe more adjectives, "those horrid memories stained my teeth, the bleach helps me forget them"???

Feb 16, 2022 3:43 pm

@Cavity_: np!

  • CoNN13Killz
Feb 16, 2022 12:50 pm

@smile_kid: ah yes i like that one and there is screaming in the background aaaa

Feb 16, 2022 12:45 pm

@smile_kid: like alien blues by vundabar !! “my teeth are yellow, hello world, would you like me a little better if they were white like yours ?”

Feb 16, 2022 12:38 pm

I don't have actual words just a concept

something about drinking bleach to whiten your teeth

like hurting yourself to be pretty or so people will like you, and no matter how much it hurts you just keep going because no ones gonna love you unless your teeth are as white as all the other kids

  • Cavity_
Feb 16, 2022 12:03 pm
@CoNN13Killz: swag, thanks <3
  • Cavity_
Feb 16, 2022 12:00 pm

@Lord_Cookie: Ah, thank you!

  • CoNN13Killz
Feb 16, 2022 11:54 am

the drill d-d-drilling into my soul JUST WAIT TILL HE GETS HERE AND SRESS-TAKES-ITS TOLLLL

Feb 16, 2022 11:44 am

ooo you could do something to do with plaque removal, filling cavities, whitening/bleaching, and it being something where you take away the genuine bad things in your life (cavities), then a little less bad (plaque removal), and then you focusing too hard on being perfect (bleaching)

Kind of like a song about falling into a pit of perfection after coming out of something bad or smth- *goop* - charlie slimecicle