A poem that I wrote! <3

XODesi_MagicalOX 2/9/2023 05:57 am 612

So, my school is doing a creative writing thing and I just submitted a poem for it! I just wanted to put it on here to see what you guys think of it! I'm not a professional writer but I love writing and have been my whole life! Here it is!

Lemons & Limes

You can be the lemon to my lime

Because when we are both combined

My words, your art

My brains, your heart

We create something so unique

Our own symphony

Our own world that no one else can see

So you’ll be the lemon

And I’ll be the lime

You’ll make the lemonade

And I’ll make the key lime pie

We’ll create so many beautiful things

Oh, my dear lemon to my lime.

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Mar 6, 2023 2:54 pm

that was majestic tbh jump

Feb 14, 2023 8:54 am

THIS IS SO !!!! heart bounceheart bounceheart bounceheart bounceheart bounce /pos

Feb 14, 2023 8:53 am

I LOVE THIS SM AHHHH UR GREAT WITH UR WORDS!! (This poem is so wholsome im crying

Feb 11, 2023 10:42 am

shockshockshockshockshockWHAT. ur so talented…. its definitely giving gimme my lime!!!!!!/po

Feb 11, 2023 9:27 am

this is so cute omg!!!! x3 beating heartbeating heartbeating heart

Feb 10, 2023 8:23 pm

thats so !!!!

Feb 10, 2023 7:48 pm

i love it kao crykao cry thats so cute omg i love that so much ive written all of one love poem and it was oOoOoKkKk. i guess LMFAOOO

Feb 9, 2023 12:57 pm

that's amazing!!!! I hope u win!! happy

Feb 9, 2023 10:31 am

I love it sm1!!1 hkheart

Feb 9, 2023 9:15 am

I love this it's so cute