Read my thesis and give feedback/critic it

CybrBoy 4/12/2022 08:44 pm 247

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or not idrk i just need atleast one person to help lmao

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14vLa_U3kfqb_fn...

Edit: I havent done the last paragraph, ima do it tmmrw bc we are spending all of class on it

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Apr 12, 2022 8:53 pm

It seems pretty good, idk what class you're writing it for but in my classes language such as I, we, you, is only ok in like direct quotes but besides that everythign has to be kinda like 3rd person (if yk what i mean)

otherwise looks good! big grin